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The Unrequited Dream by ~JenniferStarling:iconJenniferStarling:


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For ~Prose-R-Us's contest, [link] .

Song chosen: Slipknot – Vermillion Pt. II: [link] Title from lyircs, suggested by ~evilabnormalvamp

Potential Major Spoiler: If you liked this you might like Human Nature, because, as I realized ¾ of the way through writing this, it has almost the same f---ing plot. Well, maybe not exactly, but if you saw the movie, you'd read this and think, "Human Nature!" I might have changed enough so that that's not a total ripoff, though. Do you think so? I totally didn't realize how similar the ending was till I thought about it! Then I was like, %*^$!!!!! However in Human Nature you know the dead person is dead right from the start.

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:iconevilabnormalvamp:
I don't dare critique the Mighty One. However, I don't like the title. **stabs self**

I read this while listening to the song on repeat, which made the experience even more amazing. I've never heard of or watched the movie you were talking about, but I totally could now. No, I have no problem with lesbians. I love lesbians. I love that you took this song, took this assignment, and made it about lesbians.

I. Love. You.

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:iconparachutecity:
that

was beautifully awesome.


your writing is very well-paced and flows so well.

pleasure to read.
:iconjenniferstarling:
Haha. Have any title suggestions? I suck, suck, suck at titles and at least half the time would love for someone to retitle my work.

You are the mighty one, BTW. :worship: I say this with no facetiuosness whatsoever.

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Current novel-in-progress.
:iconevilabnormalvamp:
I could totally never, never, never, never come up with a title worthy enough for the one who made Vermillion Pt II about lesbians. Seriously, the magnitude of this IS INCREDIBLE. I didn't fave this already? I meant to; my button must have just not gotten pressed :XD:

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stop hiding.
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:iconravenstear:
That is awesome. The title is a little odd. Love the story. Excellent take on the song. (its one of my favorites...)

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"Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever."
~ by Anonymous ~
As i look through the lock on the chains around my soul i see tears are just the souls way of bleeding-me

Bitter the secret Furie
:iconevilabnormalvamp:
Oh hey, hey, maybe Unrequited Dream, because it's late, I suck, and I'm anti-creative? Or some other part of the lyrics? Those are some damn good lyrics.

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stop hiding.
i can handle you.
:iconjenniferstarling:
Do you have any title suggestsions? :please: Totally open to them; this is one of my "someone fix the title for me!" stories.

And thank you. :)

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Current novel-in-progress.

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