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I got this sappy idea on the train this morning. God only knows why; I've been feeling very weird lately. Almost optimistic. I disgust myself. I have another story with a somewhat different plot but similar elements I might submit later but for now, you get this. The ending could be sappier, trust me; it kind of was in my mind but I couldn't bring myself to write it that way.

Edit: I'm changing the fricking category. This doesn't even have any romance in it!!!

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:iconinfog:
Wow, this is a really good story. :#1:More realistic than sappy, too, which is a plus. :+favlove: (<heart, plus, fav.... heh, never mind)

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:iconjerzchick16:
i like this. +fav it has a good ending, and it wasnt what i expected. :D great job

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if i stop myself before loving again, am i stopping myself from the greater pain as well..or only causing more of it?

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:iconravenstear:
you know for a romance that wasn't half bad (don't tell my friends i admited that i will deny it) i am sure the ending could have been sappier but well i like it she just leaves... its kinda funny. your characters have such great dialogue... you are a fabulous writer....i must fav this.....good job.
:iconjenniferstarling:
Lol, thanks. I was kind of expecting them to wind up kissing but I couldn't make it work.

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:iconjenniferstarling:
Lol, thanks. In my mind they wound up getting together but when I tried that I couldn't find an end to the story :P

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